Stolen moments were all we ever had together
the forbidden fruit that tasted so sweet
I would stare at you as if trying to memorise your face
to visualise you as I closed my eyes to dream
I wonder if you knew when you kissed me goodbye
that it would be the very last time
the last time our bodies would feel the wondrous
heat of passions longing
Time travels so slowly now
as my life stands still and
I wait for the call that never comes
Do you hear me crying in the midnight rain
or have you already forgotten that you loved me once?
6 comments:
Sad, but haunting. Evocative. The image is perfectly suited to the poem - good choice. Great work, hope to read more!
Thankyou so much Beautiful Witch. I appreciate your feedback.
The sadness of despair. Very well put.
I'm flattered Anthony. I have seen you around as I've been lurking and value your opinion.
That image is riveting!! Is it yours??? the words/writing were excellent counterparts to that image. The protaganists standing in the rain...so rich and sad. great JOb!!
Amarettogirl - I wish I could take credit for the pic but no it was found on the net. Thankyou so much, I appreciate the feedback as I am new at fictional works.
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